Post-16 Feedback Form
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Focus:
29.12.13
Research
and Planning (4/20 = Level 1)
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Strengths:
1.
Some evidence
of research has been completed but there is too much work missing for you to
be able to leave a Level 1 at the moment.
2.
Some evidence
of drafting both your digipak and your magazine advertisement.
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Areas for improvement:
1.
Ensure all
tasks are uploaded as you cannot leave a Level 1 with so much incomplete work.
Both tasks are missing – you have a basic mock but not the products.
2.
Arrange a time
for your own photo shoot and you will need to be able to show: appropriate
mise-en-scene, editing, manipulation of images and text etc.
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Resulting Actions (student response):
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Focus:
29.12.13
Print,
Level 1
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Strengths:
1.
You have made a
rough mock of your items.
2.
The mocks you
have are bright and colourful which would appeal to the target audience.
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Areas for improvement:
1.
Explore shot
distances and their impact on your target audience.
2.
More font
research, particularly size, would be useful before completing your final
product.
3.
You have not
included all conventions of form – complete the research for this and then
use it to guide your final product.
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Resulting Actions (student response):
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